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Tuesday, June 27, 2017

The Cloud Made Of More...

The Cloud Made Of More...

Hi guys! In writing we had to write a story about a cloud that was made of more. I tried my best to make it a perfect story but it was hard. There is a link to the video that we watched for inspiration (it is a beer ad)! I have also included some pictures that I have created!

Here is the slide that I made for my story: 


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  1. AnonymousAugust 17, 2017 at 9:27 AM

    Hi Mikayla. i think that your story was amazing because I have watched the video and i could not see anything ronge and i didn't see a mistake with it next time you do some awesome writing i think you should make it a bit bigger so that it is easier to read.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 17, 2017 at 9:32 AM

    Hi Mikayla,I think that your writing is the best. But next time you should make your words bit bigger so it is easier to read. I have watched your video and I think that it is a amazing but keep up the good work Mikayla.

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