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Tuesday, March 28, 2017

Super Park not Spencer Park

W.A.L.T Write an information report that informs the audience.

Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
  • I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.
  • The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
  • Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
  • A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.


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On Friday the 10th of March Ako Ngatahi, Ruma Toru and Wahi Ako went to Spencer Park.I was in group 3. On the bus ride I sat by my friend Risha. We talked about how exciting it was and now nervous we were. The bus ride seemed to be very short.

Then we hopped out we got into our groups. Once we were in them the teachers that were in charge of the group had roll call. Then we had a pep talk in our groups, we also got put into smaller groups, the number on my hand was made into 3D My mini group called ourselves the Golden Rose’s (it was all girls). First we went to play at the playground. I climbed to the top of the big climbing frame.  and saw the wetlands, but I was scared to go down. In the end I managed to get myself down calmly ( I was still happy to be on the ground again). Then group 3 had to leave the playground to start our day. We went to the bird look out and when group 3D was called to go up the bird lookout we had to climbed some pretty steep steps. When we got up the top of the lookout I saw lot’s of spider webs. The spider webs looked like teacups. When I first saw the spider web’s I thought they were flowers!

Once we got down from the bird lookout group 3 had a little snack. Then we got up and went to the horse trail where there was kinda like a lookout for to look at the horse trail. When we went in there was some stands to stand on to see the horse’s. We saw a horse that was pooping. Then we sat down and had some morning tea.

For lunch I ate my sandwiches, my cookies, my yogurt and my bar. Then we went back to the playground for a little play in the playground. This time I went on the swing and not the climbing frame!

Then group 3 went to the beach and we had to collect some shells for the art we were doing. I found a big piece of glass, some driftwood and even found halve a bicycle light!

Then we went back onto the bus and I sat by Risha. I sat by the window this time. I was so tired that I nearly fell asleep. Risha and I mainly chatted.

I had so much fun at Spencer park I think it should be called Super Park not Spencer Park!

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